so one day
I came to my house
then i see my dog
with the fish in the bed
then the wall came off the wall.
It was so nice I joined them
then my dog came
he was sad cuz his bird did not
took his seeds
STRANGE DAYS
- Welcome to TeenCentral and thank you for sharing your writing with us, which kind of seems like a poem. That’s why we wrote it here the way we did. We hope you don’t mind. So many of our writers see the world in many ways and that’s completely fine with us!
- Your poem seems to speak about different types of creatures (or people) meeting up together and there being various reactions to these meetings. Sounds a lot like life to us. In fact TeenCentral has a whole section of our website dedicated to relationships if you want to take a look.
- If you ever want to write back with some more straight forward explanations of what’s happening in your life we will be able to give you more straightforward feedback. *Not that we don’t like the poetry – we totally do.
SOMETHING ELSE TO TRY
- You’re definitely a “creative” so maybe you’d like to try one of the following to express yourself:
- Journaling for stress reduction – CLICK HERE for the article and instructions.
- Art Journaling – CLICK HERE for the article and instructions.
